I had a look at the blogs this even and where I noticed something that needed attention, I left a comment. However even if I didn't leave a comment for, you should check your blog post.
A number of students are behind schedule.
The next time I look at the blogs, it will be to assign them a mark.
Some comments I made:
Some comments I made:
- you are a bit behind schedule.
- why does the font change?
- what's the yellow highlighting about?
- See the notes on the blog about the common mistakes
- you may need to fix the dates
- perhaps you could put the movie title in the heading
- does the first paragraph really say anything?
- There's no need to introduce yourself at the start of the post.
- some of the usage here is incorrect. you may need to get a native English speaker to read your posts
- Don't have all the text centered.
- Watch the tense. Are you writing in the past tense or the present
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